Sunday, October 31, 2010

ABC’s of Writing a Book

Always:
It’s always on my mind: When I first started writing this saga three years ago, I didn’t have huge chunks of time to make bad choices and mistakes to speed up the learning curve. If the love for telling a compelling story had been absent or fake, I would’ve never made the progress or learned the hard lessons of merely writing and structuring a story. The muse is always with me. It’s like running into a brick wall. Bludgeoning yourself against it until there’s a crack, is lunacy if you don’t carry a vision in your heart…at all times. It’s more than that simple counterfeit for inspiration: mood. It’s a routine, often boring and tiresome routine. It’s a “I gotta do this no matter what” attitude. In reality, that is how you keep the dream alive, looking for kindling and stoking the fire with routine. You have to make the best of time. It doesn’t matter what mood you’re in.
Early last week I was writing on two and a half hours of sleep after a bout with insomnia the night before. I gulped some coffee and wrote mincingly from 9AM to 1:45PM. At 1:35PM I typed one of the best lines in the whole book, almost by accident. If I had succumbed to the excuses I gave myself, I’m sure I wouldn’t have stumbled—literally stumbled—upon that line.
Be:
Be a writer, like a pro athlete or salesperson or guitar player: train. Write/play every day, something. That is the law. Practice taking thoughts from your mind to paper at the very least; get a journal, a blog, write. Get a coach via other writers. When you’re reading a book or watching a movie, get a bird’s eye view of what’s happening to your feelings, your mind. What makes you react? Make notes. Learn from watching “the game”.
Submit to a wise writer. Read books about the art of writing and storytelling structure. I’ve read twenty plus at this point about the art. I know that some so-called storytellers do not read books about the art. To prove it, one can find ample evidence in a stack of vain self-published books. What astounds me is the seemingly complete lack of training and comprehension. Seems to me, if one loves writing, then one would study it. Faced with the odds of being published, many of these vain people wonder why they had to self-published or turn themselves into cheap quasi avant garde rebels, making six books sold into some sort of bohemian badge. I have an odd reaction when reading many self-published authors: anger. I get furious. They’ve put all this effort and money (paying the printer) but obviously spent nothing, including time on the study of the art. I also get the urge to just stop writing now and send my manuscript in. Against this “competition”, I’m a freaking combo of Hemingway and King.
I do acknowledge there are many excellent and/or successful self-published authors. Vince Flynn self-published his first book and there are many exceptions to the rule nowadays. However, generally speaking, “self-published” means the agent or publisher had significant challenges with your work.
If you’re intending to be a successful writer, study the art! Do not leave it to the gods of publishing, luck, or a hunch. Be worthy of your calling. When you pick that pen, pick it up like a highly motivated, highly trained warrior, or like Eddie Van Halen picks up his guitar in his studio away from the crowds.
Creating:
Creating a compelling story has a high difficulty factor, like spinning saucers on sticks. I had no concept of the intellectual challenge when I started (maybe because I’m so dumb). The odds are against you and me. One has to be on ones toes. The process is one thing, but there are times when thoughts bloom or drift into your mind that are thrilling, awesome…and substantial as mist. Why? Creative thoughts are like dreams; we forget them. As a scientist has a net for catching butterflies, a writer must have a notebook to catch thoughts. I have a notebook named “Thought Catcher” (Dream Catchers hung on the rearview mirror don’t work). Carry one of those little 3x5 composition notebooks; it can fit in your back pocket. I carry one and it’s packed with thoughts, dialog, scenes, character notes. All you need is a reminder, not the full-blown scene or idea. Multiple times, I’ve had a great thought about the story. I assumed since it was so awesome that I would easily remember when I sat down at the laptop or when I got to a notebook. Wrong! It’s like retelling that half-forgotten dream as the day wears on, you remember less and less. Creation dies. Sometimes I forget the notebook. I find a receipt or napkin, and scratch with a pen that’s running out of ink. It’s that crucial. Thoughts fly away; catch them before they do.
I write this to myself as well as others. I need to remind myself to follow my own advice.
Always Be Creating.    

Monday, October 4, 2010

Don't Plan on Inspiration, Plan on Plodding Relentlessly

So...what are you going to do with your future? Imagine yourself leaving a fertile mountain range to trek across a desert plain to another mountain range, that you hope is fertile. I did that, I made some mistakes, I adjusted, I learned. I'm doing those aforemention three, seems almost by the second. I'm still trekking. The other range of mountains isn't so hazy now. I'm sure there will be some last minute pitfall, "beelzebub has a devil put aside for me." A ravine into which everything could tumble might appear beneath my feet at the moment I reach the edges of the other side.
"We don't plan to fail, we fail to plan," said Harvey MacKay. I remember thinking that the muse would compel me to the writing desk. I would walk, hypnotized to the laptop and begin typing in a stream of consciousness, a masterpiece of universal renown. At the end, I would print it, call my publisher, who would overnight a SASE for my manuscript. Okay, not really, but very early on I was deceived by moods of inspiration and held them in too high regard. I thought I had to sustain these moods, like a dopehead thinks he needs a doobie to think clear. That slowed me down for years. I would only write when inspired. That was a bad plan. I was waiting...and if you are waiting for inspiration, you're not a writer, you're a waiter. My plans kept crumbling. I stayed in the foothills of my comfort, venturing on the edges with an outburst of inspiration once in a while. You can't plan on inspirational moods to drive you across the desert.
That was a long time ago now. I'm not an inspiration junkie now. I've been sober for a while. What you have to do is plod relentlessly across the barren landscape. Very simple. That's "the plan". Write. Write some more. Then ...write again. When you're done with that, write. <repeat> Then, amazingly, what happens is that when you fathom what you've done--a 409 page MS Word manuscript!--you get inspired, really inspired. You start to think that you're really going to pull this off. That your characters really are going to intrigue people, that the story will take the readers by the throat, heart and mind.
Doing this for the money is laughable. The odds are too great. What keeps me going is thought of giving the reader the emotions I had when reading a great book, or watching a great movie, something lasting, unforgettable. If someone tells me that, it will be worth it. I heard that the odds of writing a New York Times bestseller are slightly better than dating a supermodel.
So as Jim Carrey said  in Dumb and Dumber, "So, you're tellin' me there's a chance...yeah!"
ART

Sunday, August 22, 2010

Break Time is Over

In early August I completed the first draft of Part II after thirteen months. During the break I read two excellent fiction books: The Searchers by Alan LeMay and Troy: Lord of the Silver Bow by David Gemmell. The most time-consuming thing has been laying the ground work for my Author’s Platform. During this time, I’ve been jotting notes in my little notebook about Part III and the book as a whole. I have one more project to complete before I start writing Part III: I need to read Part I and II back to back, it’s 402 pages. I need things fresh in my mind before I lead a 50,000 word charge into the climax of Part III.


When I finish writing Part III, I’m thinking I’ll rewrite the whole book having all things in mind as I go through it. I’ll set the whole book next to my computer and place my fingers on the keys and type it out again, adding and subtracting, buffing and shining until the end. This will be like having the 30,000 ft view at that point, I’ll finally have a grasp of the scope and depth of the book’s entirety that I have dreamed of having. I can foreshadow better, say things better, hint at themes, and solidify the premise so that every character, chapter, paragraph and word rings with authenticity.

This will also help me finally write an excellent synopsis and what the book world calls a “book trailer” …next time you’re in the book store read the back of the book, that’s ‘the hook’ …and that’s what I need to write to draw in the readers out there in the net world that I’ll be reaching with my Platform.

I have not lost one ounce of passion since I started three years ago, but that doesn’t mean I’m not intimidated by the goals I’ve set and grappling with this epic saga. I’ve had to revise things a bit. Realistically, I don’t think I can be finished until Spring of 2011.

Some time around then, I’ll begin to reveal more about the characters and story by putting up a more detailed back of the book snippet.